HPAI · Finished editorial example
Three completed short-clip editing briefs
These are the complete planning outputs for the fictional transcript, not extracted video clips. No source recording was supplied. Boundaries remain approximate until an editor checks actual footage.
| Clip | Source range | Takeaway | Meaning to preserve | Editorial title | Visual check |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| A | 00:28–01:10 (approx. 42s) | Protect a writing-sized area | Retain the visible area-marking action and the 00:54 takeaway. | New title: Make space for the task | Vertical framing must keep hands and notebook visible. Verify the first complete sentence and last breath in footage. |
| B | 01:10–01:58 (approx. 48s) | Group stationery | Keep enough setup to explain which tools stay within reach. | New title: Keep everyday tools together | Keep holder and reach test inside the frame. Exact spoken opening is not supplied. |
| C | 01:58–02:42 (approx. 44s) | Route a loose cable | Only use if safe handling and a visible result exist in the actual recording. | New title: Keep the cable out of the work area | Check the earlier safety context. Reject this clip if the crop hides the connector or the result. |
Caption treatment
The only supplied direct quote is at 00:54: “The aim isn’t an empty desk. It’s space for the task you actually do.” Preserve it. Transcribe all other captions from real audio; do not turn the topic summaries into invented quotes.
Handoff checklist
- Verify the first and last complete thought.
- Record exact in/out points after watching.
- Preview the vertical crop with hands and objects visible.
- Check captions against audio, then review without sound.